AND SILENCE MAKES IT SO
By Hyperion
way down in the dying land
the darkness seems to know
i will take you by the hand
and silence makes it so
travel light and mark your path
the darkness seems to know
otherwise you face its wrath
and silence makes it so
if you get there before i
the darkness seems to know
keep the vigil; danger’s nigh
and silence makes it so
heed the twilight of the day
the darkness seems to know
growing black and bleeding gray
and silence makes it so
your journey came to crossroads’ deep
the darkness seems to know
you bowed and made new vows to keep
and silence makes it so
your path forever altered there
the darkness seems to know
the burden yours to never share
and silence makes it so
severed ties are on your mind
the darkness seems to know
those you scorned and left behind
and silence makes it so
now i am your master true
the darkness seems to know
be still and know i come for you
and silence makes it so
way down in the dying land
the darkness seems to know
i will take you by the hand
and silence makes it so
This poem is called a “dirge”, which is a funeral song. I was inspired by the immortal Lyke Wake Dirge. The set up is that the second and fourth line of each stanza is the same. The trick—and it’s not easy—is to get each stanza to be relevant to the repeated refrain, but still different. The Lyke Wake Dirge is written in an older vernacular of English, so may be a tad tricky to understand, but read it out loud. You’ll get it. My dirge is also meant to be read out loud, so if you can, it will greatly make the experience better.
2 comments:
Read like a pro!
What a sexy voice you have, cousin!
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